Thanks for checking it out Monkey_Man , funnily enough I actually started with the end on this one! But I have to admit I had a fondness for the track as a whole and hoped it would get more attention.
I think I’m now getting towards the stage where the elephant in the room (outside of my awful voice which I can’t seem to do anything about and lessons wouldn’t change, but it doesn’t matter cos when I get some good songs eventually someone else can do the singing and I can do the counting of all that pesky cash instead :P) is the songwriting itself, obviously playing skills can always be improved but I’d be lying to myself if I said they’re getting in the way except when it comes to soloing. So I think it won’t hurt to do some studying of the art of songwriting, gonna go see who has good YouTube videos on it now.