A moody little ditty about a little girl who befriends the last android hiding in the forest who is being hunted by man. Twist on Wizard of Oz. I threw the kitchen sink in this one; Nashville Tuning, Synth, etc. I'm a little muddy on the synth at beginning of first Dirty guitar part because I've only played keys like 5 times. (Maybe 7 times now, and there is so many knobs to turn). A better musician could find a proper riffage. Per and Franjoe30 made me do this stuff.
Tin Man
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Good job, the guitar to drum balance is really getting much better on this one and the guitar playing is also getting cleaner and sharper. Good hooks, great progress!
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Cool track, got a great alternative (for lack of a better word) vibe to it, some 80's goth or again 'alternative' style vocals is what I hear for that track, just my opinion. Very nice change at 1:50, that's the stuff
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Great progress BayouTexan , super nice how those layers of sound(s) are playing together. I like that synth idea, very cool! Well done
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Per deangersmith deadman42 Wow! Thank you guys! I started having regrets after I posted it that it wasn't that good, and I was trying to do too much at one time. You guys got my spirits up!
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Keep on rocking dude
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Stay with it Killer
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Keep on rocking dude
Stay with it Killer
You know it!
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Good progress , well done , you're getting tighter on the guitar lines
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Good progress , well done , you're getting tighter on the guitar lines
Thanks to you and the others for moving me along!
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This is brilliant, you can really hear your progress you should be very proud of this
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This is brilliant, you can really hear your progress you should be very proud of this
Thanks friend! Honestly, I was concerned it did not come out good but after all the surprising compliments I am starting to feel like a musician!
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I applaud your willingness to publish your music. Your efforts certainly sound a lot better than my first efforts.
Keep at it!
Cheers,
Mats N
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I applaud your willingness to publish your music. Your efforts certainly sound a lot better than my first efforts.
Keep at it!
Cheers,
Mats N
Thank you! I have to admit, it is intimidating to do this amongst so many great musicians here, but critique from my peers will get me where I want to be.